Great review of In Her Mother’s Shoes

Okay, so I didn’t win the WD Self Published Book Competition. But I felt like a winner when I received this evaluation of In Her Mother’s Shoes:

22nd Annual Writer’s Digest Self-Published Book Awards
Entry Title In Her Mother’s Shoes
Author: Dawn Lajeunesse
Judge Number: 96
Entry Category: Genre Fiction
Books are evaluated on a scale of 1 to 5, with 1 meaning “needs improvement” and 5 meaning “outstanding”. This scale is strictly to provide a point of reference, it is not a cumulative score and does not reflect ranking.
Structure, Organization, and Pacing: 5
Spelling, Punctuation, and Grammar: 5
Production Quality and Cover Design: 5
Plot and Story Appeal: 5
Character Appeal and Development: 5
Voice and Writing Style: 5
Judge’s Commentary:

IN HER MOTHER’S SHOES by Dawn Lajeunesse is a touching, deeply satisfying story about a critical part of a woman’s midlife journey, which includes a journey where she must also face her past.
The front cover is very appropriate and will encourage readers to look inside the book. I like the image of the silk shoes resting on top of old letters. On the back cover, the story is summed up very well. The author biography is interesting. I can just imagine the author writing amid her other activities. I know many authors, and this sounds like their lives. I would have also enjoyed seeing an author photo on the back cover, or at least inside.
The story starts out with a dilemma that will be familiar to most women — too much to do in too little time. Because the story is so easy to relate to, it’s easy to keep reading. The problems the heroine faces with her aging parent are also familiar to many readers. However, the problem does introduce the opportunity for the heroine to dig into the past to revisit distant times, which in turn gives her a chance to reassess her life and to grow. I think women of all ages, but particularly middle aged women, will appreciate this book. The story is a snapshot of real life. Women everywhere will appreciate IN HER MOTHER’S SHOES.

About Dawn Essegian Lajeunesse

I, like so many others, am a novelist struggling for recognition. My last three novels, THE EYES HAVE IT, IN HER MOTHER'S SHOES and STAR CATCHING, are available in e-book format through Amazon and other formats by request here or on my website. AUTUMN COLORS was my first novel and is still available through Amazon and B&N in multiple formats. My early writings are women's fiction, one also suitable for YA. My work-in-progress is a historical fiction about the Armenians who settled in Troy, NY in the late 19th and early 20th centuries. Come visit me at my website:
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